WTF
dude im the only fucker on NG that still posts 30 second songs!
I love the spicatto used for the strings, I think a High pitched bell would work very nicely to progress this song. The Saw arp love it! but thats me being a techno head. But dude this is not bad. I would love to work on it if you like. I would suggest 4 on the floor but keep or tom hits, Its very nice.
Heavy brass could also sway the mood of this song. and when it doubt Piano out... or be like jesse, and use pan flutes!